Hello guys, this is video interview about the place where I live in. so, just watch and enjoy the video If you want to give me correction for the mistakes, critic and advice, or etc, I gladly accept it. Thank you.
It's a great video... But at some part you have to make some correction like : I must move from there, it's better to say I have to move from there ...
Good video fahri! But maybe u should explain more detail "cikarang, Bekasi Indonesia" to be "cikarang in west java, west java is one of the provinces in Indonesia"
It's a great video...
ReplyDeleteBut at some part you have to make some correction like : I must move from there, it's better to say I have to move from there ...
oh I see, thank you ipeh for the correction
DeleteGood video fahri! But maybe u should explain more detail "cikarang, Bekasi Indonesia" to be "cikarang in west java, west java is one of the provinces in Indonesia"
ReplyDeleteoke fina, I forget to explain more detail
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