MY FAVORITE PHOTO
The important things
- It was taken last year, 2 May 2017
- I taken photo in Tanah Lot during sunset
- I visited the cave in which there is the holy snake
Description
My favorite photo was taken last year, 2 May 2017 when i went study tour at Tanah Lot, Bali. I want
share a little experience about this study tour. This journey takes quite a
long time, during two days. This journey was really exhausting, because we
went study tour to Bali by bus. But tired of it instantly lost when already up
there, we visited some places such as, Kuta beach, Pandawa beach, Tanjung Benoa, Tanah Lot, and etc. All places that we already
visit, I like. But, as I said before especially Tanah Lot, in there that’s
place I prefer than others. Why? because when I taken photo in there, I thought
there is different with another photos. Like something that could not be
describe, I find the philosophy in the picture. I really like it, like a
silhouette.
Moreover, the photo was taken during sunset. The most I remember
when in Tanah Lot is when I visited the cave in which there is the holy snake. According
to history, the snake was already hundreds of years in the cave. Therefore it
is called the holy snake. This moment can’t be forgotten. I really miss this moment, togetherness, and etc. Now all is over, I hope my friends always
remember this moment. All that we have done, and let be the memories. Hopefully
one day I can feel it again. If I could replay the time back, I'm definitely
happy.



You've got a great experience...and I enjoy reading your article but there are some sentence that start not with capital letter after dot
ReplyDeleteOke ipeh, thanks for the correction. After this, i'll fix this
DeleteOMG! An amazing photo, Fahri... I love the sunset๐
ReplyDeleteI wish it will keep on your memories.. Again, I suggest to you to write the outline of your story, because it's graded.
oke alam, thank you for the suggest. i'll fix it. you are the real my friend :)
DeleteWawww it's great moment, amazing photo and good article, i have some suggest for you, "My favorite photo is when I went study tour to Bali. It was taken last year, 2 May 2017 at Tanah Lot, Bali." I think this sentence will be better if you make more structural so, the reader more easy to understand what are you want to say, become "My favorite photo was taken last year, 2 May 2017 when i went study tour at Tanah Lot Bali." Good Job Fahri!!!!
ReplyDeleteoke winda, thank you for the suggest :)
DeleteMasyaallah... What a beautiful photo and experience you have, i hope you always have a good experience and remember to be grateful to Allah
ReplyDeleteokay naura, thank you so much. my life isn't perfect, but I'm thankful for everything I have :)
Deletekeep spirit naura.
Good article, awesome moment, but in the article has a some word, you forget tu use capital at the name place. More focus fahri, but overall thats a good article, good job ๐๐
ReplyDeleteokay ghassan, i'll fix this. Thx u for the correction :)
DeleteUwuu of course study tour is memorable moment for us ๐ but I think the "My favorite photo is when I went study tour to Bali" should be "My favorite photo is when I went to Bali during study tour"... good job fahrii๐
ReplyDeleteOke ca, thx u for the correction :)
DeleteWuihhhh, your story was so memorable wasn't? I think there's a few verb that you still using present verb. But, you should use past tense with your article hehe. Keep up your workss!!
ReplyDeleteWould you mind to tell me which one? Because i'm a little confused
DeleteThx u :)
Uwowow I like your first pict, it's very cool! Um Fahri I found a grammar error on sentence "Yes, this journey really exhausting," it should be "this journey was really exhausting" because this sentence suppose to be written on past tense. Don't worry Fahri, keep practice and you will be the greatest version of yourself!
ReplyDeleteuwawww lula, thx u for the correction. I learn a lot from you :)
DeleteUw it's very beautiful photos and wonderful place. I enjoy reading your article
ReplyDeleteuwww. Thx u sekar :)
DeleteWow... Such a great experience... you did a great job, Ri... keep it up!
ReplyDeletethank you manda
DeleteYou've got a great experience fahri...and I enjoy reading your article.. Good job ๐
ReplyDeletethank you iillllllllllllll
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