MY FAVORITE PHOTO

The important things

  • It was taken last year, 2 May 2017
  • I taken photo in Tanah Lot during sunset
  • I visited the cave in which there is the holy snake

Description

       My favorite photo was taken last year, 2 May 2017 when i went study tour at Tanah Lot, Bali. I want share a little experience about this study tour. This journey takes quite a long time, during two days. This journey was really exhausting, because we went study tour to Bali by bus. But tired of it instantly lost when already up there, we visited some places  such as, Kuta beach, Pandawa beach, Tanjung Benoa, Tanah Lot, and etc. All places that we already visit, I like. But, as I said before especially Tanah Lot, in there that’s place I prefer than others. Why? because when I taken photo in there, I thought there is different with another photos. Like something that could not be describe, I find the philosophy in the picture. I really like it, like a silhouette.
         Moreover, the photo was taken during sunset. The most I remember when in Tanah Lot is when I visited the cave in which there is the holy snake. According to history, the snake was already hundreds of years in the cave. Therefore it is called the holy snake. This moment can’t be forgotten. I really miss this moment, togetherness, and etc. Now all is over, I hope my friends always remember this moment. All that we have done, and let be the memories. Hopefully one day I can feel it again. If I could replay the time back, I'm definitely happy. 



Comments

  1. You've got a great experience...and I enjoy reading your article but there are some sentence that start not with capital letter after dot

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    1. Oke ipeh, thanks for the correction. After this, i'll fix this

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  2. OMG! An amazing photo, Fahri... I love the sunset๐Ÿ˜
    I wish it will keep on your memories.. Again, I suggest to you to write the outline of your story, because it's graded.

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    1. oke alam, thank you for the suggest. i'll fix it. you are the real my friend :)

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  3. Wawww it's great moment, amazing photo and good article, i have some suggest for you, "My favorite photo is when I went study tour to Bali. It was taken last year, 2 May 2017 at Tanah Lot, Bali." I think this sentence will be better if you make more structural so, the reader more easy to understand what are you want to say, become "My favorite photo was taken last year, 2 May 2017 when i went study tour at Tanah Lot Bali." Good Job Fahri!!!!

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  4. Masyaallah... What a beautiful photo and experience you have, i hope you always have a good experience and remember to be grateful to Allah

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    1. okay naura, thank you so much. my life isn't perfect, but I'm thankful for everything I have :)
      keep spirit naura.

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  5. Good article, awesome moment, but in the article has a some word, you forget tu use capital at the name place. More focus fahri, but overall thats a good article, good job ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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    1. okay ghassan, i'll fix this. Thx u for the correction :)

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  6. Uwuu of course study tour is memorable moment for us ๐Ÿ˜‰ but I think the "My favorite photo is when I went study tour to Bali" should be "My favorite photo is when I went to Bali during study tour"... good job fahrii๐Ÿ‘Œ

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  7. Wuihhhh, your story was so memorable wasn't? I think there's a few verb that you still using present verb. But, you should use past tense with your article hehe. Keep up your workss!!

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    1. Would you mind to tell me which one? Because i'm a little confused
      Thx u :)

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  8. Uwowow I like your first pict, it's very cool! Um Fahri I found a grammar error on sentence "Yes, this journey really exhausting," it should be "this journey was really exhausting" because this sentence suppose to be written on past tense. Don't worry Fahri, keep practice and you will be the greatest version of yourself!

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    1. uwawww lula, thx u for the correction. I learn a lot from you :)

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  9. Uw it's very beautiful photos and wonderful place. I enjoy reading your article

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  10. Wow... Such a great experience... you did a great job, Ri... keep it up!

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  11. You've got a great experience fahri...and I enjoy reading your article.. Good job ๐Ÿ‘

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